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some poetry
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Mar 11 2011, 8:24 pm - by Love-hime


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these are some poems i've written for homework at school, so i thought i'd put them on here. enjoy ^_^v


this one is from...maybe 2 or 3 years ago? i was inspired by listening to the song Dismantle.Repair by Anberlin.


 


Goodbye


 


You said you had to leave,


But I didn’t want you to go.


I’ve cried so many tears,


But now you’ll never know.


I can’t believe you left,


I’ve known you for so long.


It’s hard for me to take


The fact that now you’re gone.


I never thought it’d happen,


Never thought I’d see the day


When you told me you were leaving,


And then you went away.


Sometimes I still wonder,


If you knew how much I cared.


And though my porcelain heart’s dismantled,
I hope yours has been repaired.


 


 


and this one is from last year, and i was insipired by Bleach, believe it or not!


 


Hands nor Hearts


 


We are merely human.


We are only beings


Who do not know what to do


With our hands.


If I reach out to you


With my hands


They will be farther from me


But closer to you.


If my hands close the distance


Will you meet them with yours?


If I give you my hands


Will you receive them


Or will you push them away?


When I pull my hands back


Will they be connected to yours?


If you do not meet my hands


If you do not receive them


If you do not connect to them


Will I ever again be able


To reach out with my hands?


 


We are merely human.


We are only beings


Who do not know what to do


With our hearts.


If I reach out to you


With my heart


It will be farther from me


And at great risk.


If my heart closes the distance


Will you welcome it with yours?


If I give you my heart


Will you receive it


Or will you turn it away?


When I retrieve my heart


Will it be connected to yours?


If you do not welcome my heart


If you do not connect to it


Will I ever again be able


To reach out with my heart?


 


We are merely human.


We are only beings


Who do not know what to do


With our hands


Nor our hearts.


 

Mar 13 2011, 1:12 pm - Replied by: shadowcat


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WOW, I really like your poems.

Mar 13 2011, 1:25 pm - Replied by: kusumi


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i write poems too!! i love yours so i'll share one of mine!

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i wont say that i love you





i wont say that



i care



but i will say



that i trust you



i have a trust that will never waver



i will continue to hold this trust until you



give me reason not to



though you asked me



how do i know your strong



how do i know that this is truly you



and your right



i truly don't know



im not truly sure



but i know what i feel



and i respect and trust you



to first give me the truth



before you give me the lie



theres alot i may not know about you



there a things i have no right to know



but i trust that you'll seek me out when your



on your most painfully day



after all wasn't i there before?



i remember it all so you don't have to



and it's ok if you forget i will remember for you



she told me that your afraid and that you don't have much



trust in anyone i want to get past that



and make you comfortable to the point



that my loyalty to you and the rest



will never be in question



i am a woman of my word



and you know this



truth is all i've ever given to you



and truth is all i'll ever want back



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Mar 14 2011, 6:17 pm - Replied by: Love-hime


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Nice, Kusumi!
My post is so LONG lol! I didn't intend for you to have to scroll down for like 5 minutes to read it all!
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